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Pushed Aside

pushed aside
like a limp rag doll
you excitedly rush
to play with your new little toy
it's shiny and new
and I am old and worn
you have no interest
in something that's always been there
someone who held you
when the tears flowed
your dearest confidant
when nobody else
lent you an ear
one day you'll seek me out
craving the solace you need
yet no matter how hard
you search for it
you'll not find any comfort here
for you pushed me aside
like a limp rag doll...
©2002-2009 ~nienna080
:iconnienna080:

Author's Comments

Just basically about taking somebody for granted. I'm not sure if I like it, going to revise it somewhat but offer any constructive criticism you wish. :) (Smile)

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:iconlordofthespiral:
Nice symbolism baby...this one is really good. =) (Smile) Strong delivery.
:iconcrownlessking:
it says alot. I would hate to be the onefor "Whom the Bell Tolls" so to speak::ducks:: awesome poem

--
Here I stand head in hand
Turn my face to the wall
If she's gone I can't go on
Feelin' two-foot small
"Hey You've got to hide your Love Away", John Lennon Paul McCartney

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